My visuals make an impact because they correspond with my poem. While I read it, the visuals show you exactly what I feel. It's like a personal view into my mind. I really challenged myself to show passion in both my visuals and my poem itself. Writing is a special part of me, and I tried to showcase that in my video.
For special effects I used an film roll filter on the very first shot, and an old paper on a different shot. I think that it helped me create the right mood, a kind of dark, deep, but still warm place. I wanted to show my feelings and really help you get inside my head. I wish I had added some more, but with a deadline looming over my head, getting it in seemed most important. I am happy, however, with how it turned out.
I am satisfied with how my video turned out, though I wish I had added more effects. I could have made it better by maybe spending a little longer on it, but I really believe I able to convey my story, which is all I wanted. Another is to maybe use my technical knowledge a little better by refining it in final cut some more. Despite that, I am very excited for the critique, and I hope others enjoy watching it as much as enjoyed creating it. I enjoyed watching my final video, and am looking forward to sharing it with others.
Thanks for reading! I'll see you next time! Enjoy my poem at the bottom, and in case you were wondering, the visual is my poem plan, the backbone behind my video. Anyway, farewell, and enjoy!
good effects
ReplyDeleteloud noises
lots of B-roll
Your poem is very... well, poetic. I loved the metaphors and it really pulled me in.
ReplyDeleteSome of your B-Roll was fairly dull.
On the other hand, some of your shots were great and really added to it.
I like all the book shots that you got, especially with the ken burns effect
ReplyDeleteYou can tell the wind was blowing when you shot your A-Roll
I liked how you used the text layovers
I liked your idea
ReplyDeleteyour background noices were loud
i liked that you put writting with what you were saying
I like all your b-roll
ReplyDeleteThere was some distracting noise in your voice overs
Good effects
Good effects
ReplyDeleteBackground sounds
Lot's of shots
I like your B-roll
ReplyDeleteThe audio got very bad at the end
The writing is amazing I really like your poem
I love the wording that you used.
ReplyDeleteThere was some background noise.
It was very poetic and sounded very professional.
The writing was so great!
ReplyDeleteIt was really noisey.
Great b-roll.
•I liked the different shots
ReplyDelete•the audio was kinda loud
•I liked the text layovers
I like how you said it with passion
ReplyDeleteyour audio was a little rumbly from your b roll
I really like all of your b roll
I loved the words you used and how you described it.
ReplyDeleteThe sound was a little loud it blared at first.
I also loved the way you wrote them poem!
Your b-roll was really good
ReplyDeleteYou talked really fast in some parts of your video
really well thought out words
One word "Poem" because that is what this is.
ReplyDeleteI don't see much area of improvement this is really good!
So poetic it just really works!
Nice effects
ReplyDeletethe auto was a little weird
I like your voice overs
I like the words that you chose to say
ReplyDeleteI think that you could fix the voice overs
I really like the transitions
I like how you included the many shots of books
ReplyDeleteCould have used more effects
I like the words you used
I like how you described writing.
ReplyDeleteThe audio wasn't that great.
I loved your pictures and videos.
I absolutely loved the poem, it really spoke to me!
ReplyDeleteThe thing I would improve would be lower the background noise during the voice overs.
I liked the onomatopoeia with the "skritch scratch"!
I like your effects
ReplyDeletethere was lots of nosies when you were saying your poem
I like how your visuals relate to your poem
nice B-roll
ReplyDeleteA bit loud
Amazing voice
cool idea
ReplyDeletea lot of sounds in the background
amazing voice
I liked the dialogue
ReplyDeleteThere was background noise at the end
Nice tone of voice for a poem
Your poem was so good the way you read you poem was I was amazed
ReplyDeleteThe sound could be turned down it was loud.
I loved it all.
I thought that your idea of a poem was awesome
ReplyDeleteYou could have made your voice over sound a little more clear
I liked you had a lot of pictures.